After gaining feedback on my original double page spread, I made several changes to improve the document, such as;
- Adding a strapline - because this is a common feature of double page spreads in music magazines and are important as they give the reader an introduction to the article
- Extended the size of my dominant image - because I wanted to get rid of the space covered by bricks
- Got rid of the black rectangles behind the headline - because they made the article look unprofessional and I could not get the proportions right to match the size of the text
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